http://theeverdream.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] theeverdream 2009-12-18 08:22 pm (UTC)

Thank you!

And yes, as I said above, my personal view of John isn't really this dark. But, I think that John could have a lot of emotional baggage where he blames himself for things, and I wanted to play with that idea. The entity is using John's bad self-esteem against him, so perhaps John is being a bit too hard on himself when the entity is accusing him of things.

I wrote it as the entity is really telling the truth with everything... but is that just John's perspective? It's an idea, at least!

It wasn't really where I was thinking of going with the sequel. But with people being really interested in that, I may just take it in that direction!

Thanks for the comment!

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