Thank you! It's nice to get feedback on specific parts.
On the OOC thing: It might be good for me to go into more depth on that part in another story. The way I viewed this part, the sex was consensual, and what John did wrong was being a bit rougher than he probably should have been, and being totally emotionally disconnected from his partners (which might make sense with the anonymous sex thing) and from what was happening (which probably doesn't), in a way that his partners would have picked up on and probably felt bad about.
I don't know if that helps, but at least now you know more about what I was thinking.
re: sequel - I am thinking there will probably have to be more angst before any comfort happens, but I will try to put John back together!
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On the OOC thing: It might be good for me to go into more depth on that part in another story. The way I viewed this part, the sex was consensual, and what John did wrong was being a bit rougher than he probably should have been, and being totally emotionally disconnected from his partners (which might make sense with the anonymous sex thing) and from what was happening (which probably doesn't), in a way that his partners would have picked up on and probably felt bad about.
I don't know if that helps, but at least now you know more about what I was thinking.
re: sequel - I am thinking there will probably have to be more angst before any comfort happens, but I will try to put John back together!