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theeverdream ([personal profile] theeverdream) wrote2011-02-07 05:15 am
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Hawaii 5-0 untitled wing!fic snippet 1

When Danny gets out of quarantine, Steve’s so glad to see him out from under the hospital lights and without two feet of plastic and glass between them that he can hardly breathe.

“You look good,” he manages. And he does. There’s color in his cheeks again, his eyes are less haunted, and if Steve didn’t know any better he could imagine that Danny’s fatigued expression came only from too long spent worrying about Grace and getting really bad sleep.

“Seriously?” Danny isn’t going to be treating anyone to a full-blown rant for a while, but his irritation is unmistakable. “I’m a bird.”




Hawaii 5-0 wing!fic masterpost/timeline

[identity profile] padfootthegrim.livejournal.com 2011-02-07 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)

LOL! Oh, I want to see more of this. I want to know how THAT happened! :P Wonderful.

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-08 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Unfortunately how it happened is not as happy as the snippet might imply... definitely some not-great times going on behind the scenes that I might write sometime. Thanks for the comment!!

[identity profile] elayna88.livejournal.com 2011-02-07 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
*cracks up*

More!

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-08 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
I think I am learning not to promise more because I am not exactly a reliable writer but I do hope that more of this happens; I have a lot of ideas :)

[identity profile] clwilson2006.livejournal.com 2011-02-07 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
what?? MORE!!!

steve/danny, while no Lorne/Parrish in my heart, are certainly pretty and pleasing to read. And wing!fic?? well my most favourite trope :-)

*begs for more*

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-08 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
Heheh! There is more in my head for sure and perhaps (I hope!) it will find its way to paper/screen. :)

[identity profile] oteap.livejournal.com 2011-03-18 10:01 am (UTC)(link)
“I’m a bird.”
LOL, this made me giggle so much!

I love your snippets, definitely want to read more :D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
Really sorry for the late reply!

Thanks bunches for the comment - feedback definitely helps encourage me in this verse! I've been stalled on it for a while because of landcomm stuff but I hope to pick it back up soon!