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theeverdream ([personal profile] theeverdream) wrote2011-02-20 04:10 am
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Hawaii 5-0 untitled wing!fic snippet 2

written for this prompt at [livejournal.com profile] comment_fic


"Okay, no. Seriously. You do not understand how incredibly annoying these are."

Steve supportively tried to suppress his laughter at Danny's uncomfortable-looking gesture at his own back.

"It's very hard to fit them into my shirts, for one, not to mention how uncomfortable they are when I, I don't know, press up against something like a chair or, say, a bed? And maybe Grace is young enough that she can incorporate wings into her self-identity but as for me I did not count on living my life with two extra appendages!"

Steve handed Danny a beer and made a sympathetic face. And thought that maybe someday they would reach the point where he felt comfortable saying I'll sew slots into your shirts, Danno. I'll wash the spots you can't reach.




Hawaii 5-0 wing!fic masterpost/timeline
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve laughing)

[personal profile] somehowunbroken 2011-02-20 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Danny has wiiiiiiiiiiings ahahaha yes. :D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I just for some reason could not imagine putting them on anyone else. I dunno why, maybe the ranting or maybe how Grace has them too and they were sick for a while and there was lots of worry.

*thinks about Cam Mitchell wing!fic* apparently my wing!fic is angsty more so than cracky? So far Danny has been making it sort of funny but a lot of it in my head isn't, what with the NCIS-SWAKish levels of potential death and all.

Anyway, okay, you know I like to ramble at you :) Thanks for the comment!!
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve/Danno grab)

[personal profile] somehowunbroken 2011-02-20 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Danny with wings is just the perfect mental picture, it really, really is. And he would try to make it funny when it isn't, because that's his thing, right, deflecting with humor of a sort when things get too serious. It's how he copes, by trying to put other people at ease, because then he's got some sort of modicum of control over the situation, y'know?

*possibly thinks about Danny's characterisation too much*

*possibly does the same about Steve's characterisation*

*is markedly okay with this*

:D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 12:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah. 'Cause I'm trying to picture Steve with wings and he'd just... not talk about it, basically, which would be no fun in a story, or at least would not work for the story I have in my head.

I think it would be very hard to think about Danny (http://sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com/572211.html) or Steve (http://tailoredshirt.livejournal.com/174223.html) (or Danny and Steve (http://sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com/575531.html?thread=26633771#t26633771)) too much!
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve/Danno building)

[personal profile] somehowunbroken 2011-02-20 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Steve? Talking? Yeah, nope. He'd literally just ignore the wings until they shrivelled up and went away or something. Plus they'd interfere with the swimming, and we cannot deprive the world of that, we just can't.

And holy rghaerpgqaerg THAT PICSPAM, how have I not seen it, AHHHHH the hotness of it, ahhhhhhh I'm flailing again. And that VIDEO and he calls Steve *honey* :D

This show is my new happy place, I swear it. And hey, if there happens to be a 'one of Steve's sooper sekrit SEAL things was with the Stargate Program and he knows John' bunny in my head, well, can you blame me? :D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm swimming Steve..... *breaks self out of daydream* And the video? YES yes okay so maybe he says "hey" instead of "honey"? I don't know. BUT IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER because there is so much touching, Danny is touching Steve like he touches people he has known for YEARS AND DECADES and and I just... yes. Happy place indeed.

(So the thing I messaged you re: the slash? Is a life balance thing, basically. Still lots of very slashy thoughts in my head (and potential writing) -- and and and I watched H50 1x03 with my husband and he is not so much into slash but I have been telling him about the epic Steve/Dannyness, and he most of the time just thinks the things I point out can have a two-straight-guys interpretation, and a lot of times I do not disagree with him, but while we were watching the episode and Danny says why do I look like a waiter and Steve says "he doesn't know what he's talking about" and my husband made this little "awww" sort of noise of acknowledgement and I asked him about it later and he said the way he as a heterosexual guy would make another guy feel better would be by saying something that is not so obviously meaning "you look great". He said he could not deny the slash in that part and from him this means a great deal about the slashyness of this show!)

ALSO, RE: PICSPAM HAVE YOU SEEN MOONLIGHT I DO NOT KNOW IF YOU LIKE VAMPIRES BUT IT IS HOT AND SORT OF POORLY WRITTEN BUT HOT AND ALSO KIND OF HOT I can send you a link for the shows if you want. This scene (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omF_cHzHtZo) was what got me into it and is FANTASTIC but it comes from the third to last ep and is very spoilery as well as the comments so if you know you are going to watch the series (16 eps) probably don't watch that first but if you need convincing watch it watch it!

ALSO YES Steve totally knows John! I like the idea that he knows about the Stargate Program, that's totally cool. I'd thought about him meeting John in "The Stan" but now he totally needs to know about the Stargate Program, and it is past my bedtime as you can tell from the frequency of the word "totally" in this paragraph. So I am totally going to bed now, hahaha.

<3!
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve/Danno building)

[personal profile] somehowunbroken 2011-02-20 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
My happy place says Danno says honey, so so so yes. :D And the TOUCHING ahhhhhh so much touching, and the elbow grab and the smiling! :D :D

And hee, had a moment sort of like that as well - was watching with my stpedad, who turned to me during the first five minutes of the last episode and said, "Wow, they fight like they've been married for years." Which made me smile SO HARD. :D And ohmigosh I have analysed the pawn shop scene from that episode upside down and sideways and have concluded that yes, they re completely and totally in love and married. And I could go on about why for long periods of time... :D

Um, Moonlight is only 16 eps? And AOL is in it? This might be something I have to see, because mmmmm I believe in the hot and he has it, ohmigosh yes. He has it two or three times, actually. So yay for vampire!Alex!

Steve and John, they so so know each other. And maybe they were fuckbuddies in The Stan (brain melting at the hot image right now, ahhhhh) and then John has his incident and goes away and Steve gets this new assignment like a year later, and when he shows up in Colorado hey, he knows that guy... mmmmm. :D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, so going with the "honey".

YAY stepdad!! Yay vampire!Alex!

They would be such awesome fuckbuddies. Both really super intense and I think that would make for some really hot sex. Oh gosh. Wow. Um.

Yes yes and then then Steve leaves but they see each other again, when Atlantis is on Earth, and by that time they are with their ranty snarky significant others, and they all meet up for drinks or something and said significant others rant to each other about their over-adrenalined, stupid risk-taking boyfriends. Eeee! :D

somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve/Danno waist)

[personal profile] somehowunbroken 2011-02-21 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
And then in the middle of them ranting to each other, there's significant amounts of eyetalk going on with Steve and John, and just when they're getting fever-pitch with the rantiness Steve grabs John and plants a big wet dirty kiss on him, lots of tongue and teeth. And then the idea hits the other two at the same time, and yes, that so so so happens. :D

[identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
*is dead*